Just One Of Those Days Poem by Marcus McKinley

Just One Of Those Days

Rating: 5.0


I set out to write something with a twist
But, I am afraid I totally missed the mark on this

Empty
Empty
Empty
Is my mind?

I sit here and gaze
Dogged at the keyboard
Glancing at the screen
As if the poem will write itself

Over and over
I read the few lines I have
Repeating them in my head, listening
to them, bounce across an echo

Sighing, as if inspiration will come soon
The day has left the room, and with it
my focus, my motivation, my mind

empty
empty
empty
emp……..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 12 May 2011

Nice poem. Rich in depth and imagery. Beautifully conceived. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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