kanav justa

Freshman - 1,039 Points (Shimla)

Killing time or vice versa


Shadows symmetry
From the beam of the sun
Leisurely distorts

Sun in no way changes
It's we who burn
Wickedly the wheel of time does turn

Submitted: Tuesday, December 11, 2012

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  • Bronze Star - 7,067 Points * Sunprincess * (11/7/2013 2:26:00 PM)

    life has given some people more time and other people less time...guess we should make the most out of every minute we are given... time is the most precious thing we have :) I choose to spend my time with the monkeys, and getting sunkissed, but not sunburned: p (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 155 Points Ellias Aghili (12/12/2012 9:04:00 AM)

    it's totally great and a true art. i feel honored to read this perfect work
    well done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 841 Points Unwritten Soul (12/12/2012 7:03:00 AM)

    Creative! ! ! ! ! ! ...but i dont wish to kill the time otherwise we will killed in the moment as we breathing it together in our lung and memories, just wish to reverse some part of life and rejoice again or redo to fix mistakes, bring back the ceased loved ones...if we can do that...that is awesome to wander the briliant time point...stay to be a kid without worries just happy and play fun....._Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Stevie Taite (12/11/2012 6:42:00 AM)

    I love also the first part, just watching the shadows change with the Earths revolution (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Stevie Taite (12/11/2012 6:41:00 AM)

    Really good mate! Short but says a lot in my opinion. Grasp every second, with an almighty oven glove if need be! (Report) Reply

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