Killing Time Or Vice Versa Poem by kanav justa

Killing Time Or Vice Versa

Rating: 4.5


Shadows symmetry
From the beam of the sun
Leisurely distorts

Sun in no way changes
It's we who burn
Wickedly the wheel of time does turn

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stevie Taite 11 December 2012

I love also the first part, just watching the shadows change with the Earths revolution

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Stevie Taite 11 December 2012

Really good mate! Short but says a lot in my opinion. Grasp every second, with an almighty oven glove if need be!

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Owain Glyn 15 December 2012

Time is irrevocable, it's how we use it that matters.

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Neetha Sasidharan 13 December 2012

wee yet so capturing......kp going...

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 12 December 2012

it's totally great and a true art. i feel honored to read this perfect work well done.

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Unwritten Soul 12 December 2012

Creative! ! ! ! ! ! ...but i dont wish to kill the time otherwise we will killed in the moment as we breathing it together in our lung and memories, just wish to reverse some part of life and rejoice again or redo to fix mistakes, bring back the ceased loved ones...if we can do that...that is awesome to wander the briliant time point...stay to be a kid without worries just happy and play fun....._Soul

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Wabi Sabi 12 December 2012

got both angles to see one thing do. you are romantic!

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