Knew The Smoke (To Be A Prayer) Poem by Eric Cockrell

Knew The Smoke (To Be A Prayer)

Rating: 5.0


he said:
'i went four years
without a lover,
trying to do the right thing...
then one day i stood up,
packed my few belongings,
and walked off...
in search of...'

i watched him as he rolled
a cigarette, his gnarled hands
sure and steady...
stared at the light in his eyes,
and the doors...
only he knew what
was behind them.

bought him a cup of coffee,
and shook his hand,
no need for words...
wondered if i'd met Jesus,
or the devil,
or if i was looking
into a mirror!

each path, each call,
is different... each heart,
pretty much the same.
i watched him light his cigarette,
and knew the smoke
to be a prayer!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick 25 March 2012

The storytelling to this is incredible, its got a modrnist symbolism with that old appalchian feel. kind of lost on the last bit because it has so much meaning, but that just means I love it.

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Dave Walker 25 March 2012

like it. i can see a few meanings in this one. a fantasti write.

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