Ladies In Color Black Poem by Heather Burns

Ladies In Color Black

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A mysterious lady arrives
in black
most alluring and put
together
a sense of the unknown
surrounds her
skin as soft as velvet
the touch of a kitten
sophistication leads the
way
a bit of power on display
everything so in tact
a lovely lady dressed in
black.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Farah Ilyas 02 July 2013

wao what a graceful poem u have created gracefully in the grace of black..

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Otteri Selvakumar 02 July 2013

nice writing....ladies in color...poem

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Dave Walker 02 July 2013

A lovely flowing poem.

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Valerie Dohren 02 July 2013

The little black dress is infamous - you have captured the essence of it here.

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Yasmin Khan 03 July 2013

Powerful images helped in visualising the lady in black.

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Patricia Grantham 06 July 2013

Sounds like a lot of sophistication in this lady. She wears her clothing well. The black dress in contrast to her skin brings out the beauty and the self assurance that she has. Very good.

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James Mclain 06 July 2013

It is as if the mystery has been rewritten here....iip

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Neela Nath Das 03 July 2013

A poem with meticulous detail.Usage of wonderful word-picture! .

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R.j. Wynn 03 July 2013

Sounds like a Mercury Cougar in the flesh with the flash.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 03 July 2013

And now black, a mix of all colors. Nice poem.

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