Make a point and distinguish
Find a subject and finish
The anger is main enemy
This may be true with many
Many more ills occupy
Permanent opposition to annoy
At wrong time and at wrong place
To land in stormy situation to face
"No control" on tongue is dangerous
Its constant use may be disastrous
"Eat words, demonstrate no anger" the old legend is famous
Believe in peace and trust
Yes human mind is like monkey
Sometimes after fame and money
Sometimes after love lust
And sometimes act with cunning mistrust
Let ill wishes be buried deep
Never show it on face or keep
Let it be stayed for whole life journey
That shall please even almighty
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Good and simple Ruvindra Sathsarani2 hours ago to the point and very simple. but it's like a collection of advices... when it comes to that point i lost my interest
I really love this piece: Very natural in its nature blended with a value that we need to bring in our lives. With regards! Eagam Khaling, Darjeeling Jun 05,2014
another piece of wisdom as usual Tajudeen Shah2 hours ago from one of the most blessed poets of the time. maxims worth following, applying in life. God bless.
No control on anything is dangerous.... So true 2 hours ago by Seema Chowdhury | Reply
Very deep message Kenneth White2 hours ago However I felt a few hang ups with some of the wording. Perhaps these were intentional for timing? as in spoken word type? I don't know, but thanks for sharing your well woven images. Comment +1
Peace. Nidia Jimenez2 hours ago The human mind is like a monkey, but it if like a monkey then shouldn't we be living in a world of peace and carefree and not in anger? Comment +1
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Make a point and distinguish Find a subject and finish