Let It Go On Poem by Sahar Sahar

Let It Go On



Let the pain,
go on,
eyes are sore and wet,
let this rain pour on,
time is getting harder and harder,
Let this insane go on,
The crystal of heart is shattered,
something wrong is going on,
noise is masking my voice,
Is there anything, let it go on,
and go on.
No one offers space in the crowd,
If you can stand,
after pushing me down,
Then let you go on.
and go on.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 30 September 2009

No one offers space in the crowd, If you can stand, after pushing me down, Then let you go on. and go on. again the courage is found here and this is what making you the poet of courageous feelings and thoughts are relatively well designed and construction of the body of poem is best.. meaningful and heartfelt way of writing..well done..loved it..10/10

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Indira Renganathan 07 September 2009

Voice of a kind heart or incapable heart...? interesting

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