Nick Jordan.

Freshman - 598 Points (Wimbledon)

Life - Poem by Nick Jordan.

As a child I dreamt that I was flying,
Invincible, unstoppable and death defying,  
Free as a bird and soaring high,
I watched the world just pass me by,
As I grow old,
I'm far less bold,
In fact I'm exhausted if truth be told,
My body aches and my mind is gone,
The light has faded where it once shone,
But boldly I still soldier on.
As an adult I dream that I am falling,
And I hear my inevitable destiny calling,
For when my world has all gone dark,
I can safely say I left my mark.

Nick Jordan

7/1/13 


Comments about Life by Nick Jordan.

  • Dr.tony Brahmin Dr.tony Brahmin (12/30/2015 3:16:00 PM)

    As a child I dreamt that I was flying,
    Invincible, unstoppable and death defying,
    Free as a bird and soaring high,
    I watched the world just pass me by, i can safely i say i left my mark. wonderful ending of the poem with lot of fulfillment and hope. thank you. tony (Report) Reply

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  • Joshua Fegley (1/7/2013 7:04:00 AM)

    This site sucks sometimes with these comments. Anyway. Good poem Nick. (Report) Reply

  • Joshua Fegley (1/7/2013 7:01:00 AM)

    I like it Nick. Truly a realistic poem on life. (Report) Reply

  • Nicholas Rahming Nicholas Rahming (1/7/2013 6:51:00 AM)

    I love it. Almost like my poem ' My own way.
    Please feel free to read it along with my other poems for my future books. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 7, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, February 4, 2013


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