Syeda Beenish Jalil

Rookie (9 October 1988 / Rawalpindi, Pakistan)

LIGHT FILTERING THROUGH THE CLOUDS


through the clouds it drifts
a sea of milk

a ray of hope
a heavenly rope

a mist of joy
a shadow of sky

a path of noor
a flight of hoor

stairs of light
to inconceivable height

a glow in the heart
a joy, for a start

a sight to feel
a light that heal

material of dreams
a magical seam

an angels ride
sun's own pride

a sight that fills
what a magical feeling!

this poem is about the way light passes thru the clouds sometimes.the rays of light filtering thru is quite mesmerizing

PS. noor is 'heavenly light'
hoor is 'fairies'

Submitted: Tuesday, July 07, 2009
Edited: Saturday, July 18, 2009

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  • Rookie Afzal Shauq (5/31/2010 12:07:00 PM)

    a sight to feel
    a light that heal

    material of dreams
    a magical seam

    an angels ride
    sun's own pride

    a sight that fills
    what a magical feeling!

    fantastic.. the ideas you expressed in this poems are multiple but inter related to each other and a visualized effect is found.. quite interesting poem and the way you wrote is soul touching...well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 43 Points Obinna Eruchie (7/18/2009 11:32:00 AM)

    A light full of love and hope. A creative effort. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 72 Points Akram Saqib (7/9/2009 9:08:00 PM)

    good write beenish keep it on (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 963 Points Saadat Tahir (7/7/2009 8:59:00 AM)

    very nice lines

    and great footnote..... helps to understand the context
    great flow...easy read...well written]
    cheers (Report) Reply

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