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Frank Lisa IndiRa Francesca Roger Platt Cornish Martin


! ! ! ! ! Like a lunatic


Like a lunatic
she had all my oceans rivers canals and seas
tied as her anklet
she ran with that racket
traumatizing my thirst
cloudless wrenched and wasted
Like a lunatic


Deaneroger's Prospective Love Letter Tale-

Submitted: Monday, November 03, 2008
Edited: Sunday, November 30, 2008

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  • Shahzia Batool (12/5/2012 3:50:00 AM)

    Like a lunatic
    she had all my oceans rivers canals and seas
    tied as her anklet
    she ran with that racket
    traumatizing my thirst
    cloudless wrenched and wasted
    Like a lunatic

    I just quoted what i liked, what if you see the whole poem here! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • rago rago (7/8/2009 4:04:00 AM)

    the expressions are thoughtful and provoking.......... well penned........ (Report) Reply

  • Simone Inez Harriman (12/17/2008 1:56:00 PM)

    Awesome Rehan. The first of your pen I have read and I'm very impressed. I shall be reading more of you. (10 from me) (Report) Reply

  • Palas Kumar Ray (11/8/2008 1:19:00 AM)

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    Whats else but lunatic who.........................
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    a very different way of expression. (Report) Reply

  • Aijaz Asif (11/7/2008 4:29:00 AM)

    i'm out of words...i don't know what and how to write my feelings for this poem....marvellous, superb, excellent etc.etc..but your and other fellow poets writting is beyond all those words..least i can do is salute you with a bow for such a beautiful and expressive write...my all 10's are for all your write's...the title attracted me cause its my nick too 'lunatic' lol
    rgds
    asif (Report) Reply

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