Frank Lisa IndiRa Francesca Roger Platt Cornish Martin


! ! ! ! ! Like A Lunatic - Poem by Frank Lisa IndiRa Francesca Roger Platt Cornish Martin

Like a lunatic
she had all my oceans rivers canals and seas
tied as her anklet
she ran with that racket
traumatizing my thirst
cloudless wrenched and wasted
Like a lunatic


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Comments about ! ! ! ! ! Like A Lunatic by Frank Lisa IndiRa Francesca Roger Platt Cornish Martin

  • Veteran Poet - 1,255 Points Shahzia Batool (12/5/2012 3:50:00 AM)

    Like a lunatic
    she had all my oceans rivers canals and seas
    tied as her anklet
    she ran with that racket
    traumatizing my thirst
    cloudless wrenched and wasted
    Like a lunatic

    I just quoted what i liked, what if you see the whole poem here! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,462 Points Marieta Maglas (8/27/2009 10:43:00 PM)

    excellent poem, very well written.....10+++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie rago rago (7/8/2009 4:04:00 AM)

    the expressions are thoughtful and provoking.......... well penned........ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (5/14/2009 10:46:00 PM)

    Moving poem.
    10 with pleasure. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 544 Points Simone Inez Harriman (12/17/2008 1:56:00 PM)

    Awesome Rehan. The first of your pen I have read and I'm very impressed. I shall be reading more of you. (10 from me) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Viola Grey (11/16/2008 11:25:00 PM)

    ah, love and lust makes lunatics of all of us....great write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 242 Points Palas Kumar Ray (11/8/2008 1:19:00 AM)

    _____________________________________
    Whats else but lunatic who.........................
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    a very different way of expression. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aijaz Asif (11/7/2008 4:29:00 AM)

    i'm out of words...i don't know what and how to write my feelings for this poem....marvellous, superb, excellent etc.etc..but your and other fellow poets writting is beyond all those words..least i can do is salute you with a bow for such a beautiful and expressive write...my all 10's are for all your write's...the title attracted me cause its my nick too 'lunatic' lol
    rgds
    asif (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Reshma Ramesh (11/5/2008 7:28:00 AM)

    ohhhhhh! ! ! this is a superb short poem...loved it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 168 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (11/5/2008 4:33:00 AM)

    Beautifully worded. Powerful expression of love despondence......10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 142 Points Joseph Poewhit (11/3/2008 11:42:00 PM)

    I could see the insanity of it all (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 3, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, November 30, 2008


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