Soft and pale in colour,
Embraced by Mother Jupiter,
Let us ride into the sun.
Saturn will not remember,
If we have ever left.
His rings will cut deep,
So let us run with haste.
Treading through space,
Licking at what starlight
We are able to taste,
It is here, I want to remain.
So universal feeling here...Believe or not you was using my favorite and interesting subject...and it used very nice in this work...Think this poem has it ring persona too like the planet has.. :) _Unwritten SOul
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
hmmm.... this one is nice, ..... i like space too, it's one of my favourite subjects.... but this only uses it for a metaphor.... which is lovely :)