'I see planes running along the road
And cars flying among the cloud”
He shouted in wonder
His voice like thunder
He heard- “Hey Mister, you’re on your head”
Ma'am; Bizarre is apt for the read! ...... I would like to say that in the past planes were imagination of human and it turned out to be reality with Wright Brothers and as well many more..... This imagination of yours should result in invention of may be a novel means of transport dear ma'am! I enjoyed the read and the thoughts as well!
I like this poem as a poem for amusement. Penned with great idea. Many thanks for sharing.
Humorous write. Good thoughts flowing but mind is upside down. Fantastic. Loved it.
Bizarre thoughts float in the mind turning one upside down. A beauty savor and laugh it out. Thank you.
why not? this wonderful humour bizarre limerick shows us the true face of the contemporary life, the paradox era, here the poet successfully passed her message through indirect form.. I will rate it 10/10 and it goes into my treasure chest as well, thanks valsa for yours surprise as usual
I see planes running along the road X And cars flying among the cloud”
He shouted in wonder His voice like thunder -An amazing limerick! Loved reading it! Stay always blessed dear madam....10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It seems that according to the world's movement you are becoming a prophet; as what should be flying turns to running, and what should be running turns to flying. Thanks for sharing, Valsa! You are one great Poet!