Valerie Dohren

Silver Star - 3,175 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

Little Yellow Flowers


Little yellow flowers
Dancing in the breeze
Little yellow flowers
Huddled round the trees
Little yellow flowers
Seemed to know my pain
Little yellow flowers
In my mem`ry will remain

Submitted: Sunday, June 24, 2012
Edited: Sunday, June 24, 2012

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  • Bronze Star - 2,287 Points Ken E Hall (9/1/2013 3:27:00 AM)

    The message from the little flowers gives a soothing message short and luvli poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (6/13/2013 10:20:00 AM)

    !) I mean 10, great write, perfect. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,881 Points * Sunprincess * (10/10/2012 10:03:00 PM)

    oh this is a beautiful poem...love it.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,187 Points Walterrean Salley (7/14/2012 7:03:00 PM)

    Makes you take a second look at life and nature—the little things that mean so much. Very beautiful, rich and terse. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,515 Points Neela Nath (7/14/2012 6:45:00 AM)

    It reminds me the lines of Wordsworth's poem, Daffodils. Short but very deep. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Elna Nel (7/13/2012 3:35:00 PM)

    this is beautiful, in its simplicity (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 299 Points Adeline Foster (7/3/2012 3:34:00 PM)

    Perhaps those flowers are dandelions. Read mine - Of Dandelions and Tears -
    Adeline (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 532 Points Juan Olivarez (7/3/2012 12:42:00 PM)

    In the Great mojave desert, spring brings an abundance of little yellow flowers. I can't tell you the joy they bring, beautiful poem Val. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 340 Points Captain Cur (7/1/2012 4:37:00 PM)

    It's the simple things and small memories
    that give us our greatest comfort
    and cause our quills to write.
    I sense you saw their vulnerability
    yet they supported one another through
    the storms of life. Great write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 347 Points Danny Draper (6/29/2012 4:47:00 PM)

    Just read this again, lovely. Thank you Val. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie King Big Head (6/29/2012 2:00:00 PM)

    A rather quaint little poem, the king likes it
    Very much. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 519 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (6/29/2012 3:22:00 AM)

    Neat. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 283 Points Joseph Anderson (6/27/2012 12:37:00 PM)

    Let us hope those flowers will bloom again.Though wrapped in a poignant imagery style I sense your
    pain. A disturbingly, sad write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 347 Points Danny Draper (6/25/2012 6:24:00 AM)

    Little yellow flowers in drifting shadow breeze they heave and swell, fragrant in Suns hue their radiance flows to dwell. Daisies or daffodil? Does it not matter to name apart that which intrinsically brings comfort to an open and willing heart. A beauteous poem and I can see those flowers and their gleaming butter smile. Lovely. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,405 Points Diane Hine (6/24/2012 7:53:00 PM)

    Sometimes the things we usually ignore have so much significance.
    Wonderful poem Val. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,653 Points Saiom Shriver (6/24/2012 2:17:00 PM)

    a 10 for your brief and perfect poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Heather Wilson (6/24/2012 1:05:00 PM)

    Yellow flowers Val, beautiful with so much meaning and thought.lovely little poem. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,344 Points Hans Vr (6/24/2012 7:26:00 AM)

    Super poetic. The little yellow flowers that mean so few to many, mean a whole world to a poet.
    I truly love this poem.
    Very well written and full of meaning. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,639 Points Dave Walker (6/24/2012 6:08:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem with a wonderful flow. (Report) Reply

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