Living Beings Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Living Beings

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Living beings

Throughout the period
We tend to avoid
Take no care of mission
And add confusion

We have failed to keeps words
That was to be given to lord
Through prayers and attitude
But we have totally failed

Knowing full well about the futility
We have not respected an almighty
Gone against the wishes
And tried to finish the living beings

The days are numbered
And still nothing is offered
Not from inside heart
That time is near to depart

It is all not gone
Time has well passed and gone
No worthwhile is being put
The life shall shortly be cut

Living Beings
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 23 December 2015

A profound and realistic thought has been beautifully unveiled through this verse. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 December 2015

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 December 2015

welcome Kunnathuveettilravindranath likes this. Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now

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Rajnish Manga 22 December 2015

Thanks for a nicely worded poem demonstrating the futility of what we normally do in life and also the need for prayers for paving the way of our journey to the net world. Thanks.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 December 2015

It is all not gone Time has well passed and gone No worthwhile is being put The life shall shortly be cut

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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