Man searches in the garden,
For a fruit to find,
Some say it's sour others pure divine,
The dispute itself as old as time.
Does love bear fruit and produce wine?
Or does it wither and choke in the vine?
Many a man has tasted 'love'.
Some found it sour others like heaven above.
I consider myself lucky for Love I did meet.
For I am a man whose tasted Love and found nothing as sweet.
very true amazing discription of finding love as, and remember never let anyone tell u love isnt real it may not be seen in the eyes but it is seen in the heart, jood job keep writing
love this poem about love.... i give a 10+++++
Excellent poem, I consider it an honour to read any one of your poems
To portray so much about love in so few words is an achievement, a good poem!
Love is the basis of everything beautiful in our life or on earth. There are times when people do have conflicting opinion about love but there is no denying that it has a divine connection. Thanks. Some say it's sour others pure divine, The dispute itself as old as time.
So lovely poem. So lovely poem. Your thinking is good. I enjoyed your poem
Lovely poem. Love is always sweet. The tree bearing it may be full of thorns.
Theme, diction and style are simple presentation, is exuberant!
Love is the sweetest thing ever if it is true. Nice drop.
I consider myself lucky for Love I did meet Nice lyric poem, lovely to read 10