Love Poem by Connor Whyte

Love

Rating: 4.9


Feel alone and misunderstood can't get you out of my head but yet you are something very good. Can't change who I am and what I have become, Like me for who I am and don't be afraid of me for the things I have done. I am almost complete but to far to judge. Wish you were here so I can tell you what I fear, Fear being alone without your love, I have come so far and you seem to be the right one, Don't flee from me like how the others have run. I can't get you out of my head but yet you are something very good. Can't change who I am and what I have done, Like me for who I am and don't be afraid of me for the things I have done. You bring color to this colorless love which was black and so far gone turning it into something beautiful that never once was. Your saintly eyes filled with blue, You can only make this true, Walk with your hand in mine past the tall gates, And the endless flood, Climb the mountain where God stood, Embrace the cold hug that burns with the sun. Don't fall from the grace of love, Listen to the song of the white dove, Journey to reality and see whats been done. I can't get you out of me head but yet your something very good, Can't change who I am and what I have become, Like me for who I am and don't be afraid of me for the things I have done.
Whisper in your ear and clear the air between us, Life can be an opinion but do not judge.

Love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elena Sandu 30 January 2012

No free human being could resist such a beautiful write, it filled me with most positive thoughts of love, thank you for share,10

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Aria Quimby 01 February 2012

That was beautiful. I love the last two lines in particular. Very powerful. Kudos to you.

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Alexis ... 13 June 2012

Wow that was really beautiful. Your descriptions were perfect. Nice job!

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Samantha Rak 22 June 2012

Connor, you know you're amazing right?

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Heather Wilkins 06 July 2014

you describe love in its fullest. a very good write

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Chinedu Dike 28 March 2020

Beautiful love poem well articulated and nicely brought forth from the heart. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing, Connor.

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Amanda Horton 07 July 2016

Very beautifully written I feel the passion

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Victoria Hudson 18 March 2016

A wonderful poem that speaks to the heart. I have been like this many times in my life, people running away because they are scared of me because of my past. It put everything I could never say into words for me. I thank you for putting this poem where others could read it. I am very grateful. Thing is, as in this poem it states that you are wishing for the girl to love you with your past. I learned here recently that people will still love you. Even if your past is horrible.

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Mihaela Pirjol 09 March 2016

A poem written with an honest heart. Where the emotional turmoils subside, Love shall purify it.

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Alicia Phillips 16 February 2016

Very beautiful I could stop reading keep it up 😉

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