Love - A Foolish Feeling Poem by Ipsita Mohapatra

Love - A Foolish Feeling

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Love I must say is funny.
The man is flourished,
The man is doomed.
It gives pain without touching,
It stops the heart without corporeally damaging.
It twists you,
It shatters you,
Sometimes in a good way,
Sometimes the worst way possible.
The love we give,
The love we get,
All turns to sorrow.
Grief consumes like a thunder cloud in a storm.
Love is rose,
hold it carefully,
else you are pricked.

Tuesday, November 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
The chinmay 17 November 2015

true....it always gives pain...good thnkg..nicr

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Ipsita Mohapatra 17 November 2015

thank you :))

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Jazib Kamalvi 04 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Ipsita. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 November 2015

Grief consumes like a thunder cloud in a storm. Love is rose, hold it carefully, else you are pricked.. very good expressions of love experience. love remains a mystery always. thank you very much. tony

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subhasmita behura 19 November 2015

Aahaaa :) A NYC one :* ^_^ The love we give The love we get All turns into sorrow

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Ipsita Mohapatra 19 November 2015

thanks :))

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Anil Kumar Panda 18 November 2015

But why people fall in love is a mystery. Nice write.

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Ipsita Mohapatra 18 November 2015

i guess so.. thanks :))

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Souren Mondal 18 November 2015

Yes, love is a two-sided sword.. It can make everything beautiful or miserable... A well written poem Ipsita.. Thank you..

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Ipsita Mohapatra 18 November 2015

yeah it is.. :) thank you :))

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