Love And War Poem by Solmon Jejemore Oluwagbemiga

Love And War

Rating: 4.8


I am the type that follows the trends of life
When they call I give myself up for them
I have never come to play outside their walls
They never give me any imagination
That those other walls exist behind
They combine to form definition of life
They are linked together by the chains of fate
The walls of love and war!

I seem to be playing a game within their walls
A game I don't always have control of
I need to stick to the rules of the game
I want to play well and nice
I want to play fair and good
I wish to be enthusiastic about the game
I don't wish to quit too soon
The game of love and war!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
So Close 24 October 2012

with simple words you described 2 big things personally, each are more dangerous in our life....: -) »so close«

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Kelvin Owusu 13 December 2012

an excellent poem very well written and a nice truth great job

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Unwritten Soul 12 December 2012

After all what we need is to survive in life with the best place and state of mind ever we had in our heart we just want to be cool and not be so hurt...too much shaped by others' order will make our life flexibility inelastic..._Soul

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Shivani Misra 01 November 2012

Very nice n realistic.. U can write better.. God Bless. Take care :)

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Allemagne Roßmann 27 October 2012

written well..trez bien

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Asif Andalib 25 October 2012

Yeah our lives are pretty much like game of love and war. Nice poem

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