seeing eternity in every flower
being joyful hour by hour
poetry writing till the wee hour of four
thinking of you my love the one I live for.
Wow a finel lovely rhyming poem. Loves sentiments nicely expressed in a short n sweet poem I enjoyed reading. Will appeal to the loved. Pls do review my latest poem too titled pop goes...
A concise and insightful verse nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing.
A nice poetic imagination, Naida. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
Love is an eternal feeling, which, through ages has been described by poets and writers. Yet, one may feel that it has not been correctly defined as yet. I love the way you have defined love here in this poem. Love is, as you have said, seeing eternity in every flower, being joyful hour by hour, writing poetry till the wee hours and thinking of my love - to all of which I agree. I too have something to say about what I think love is and I have said that in my poem Love Is, which was published here at Poemhunter on 03 July 2013. If you have time, I would appreciate if you look at it once and say how you feel about it.
thinking of you my love the one I live for. Being joyful seeing eternity everywhere. very nice expressions. thank you A very nice poem thank you again tony
Thank you S. Zaynub Kamoonpuri for appreciating. And thank you too Jaishree Nair for the time you gave for this piece. I believe we all suffer from unexplainable definition of love, and for me it evolves on simple things so long as you show a smile in you face thinking of that person who makes you feel love and love love and love being in love.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Love beautifully expounded. Thanks