Did you ever try to shout
To the top of your lungs
Till you run out of breath
The tears show your fears?
I did.
Did you ever run
Till your lungs burn
And your legs ache
Cause your dreams break?
I did.
Because I'm sad
Because I'm broken
And I am mad
My pain unspoken.
I just cried, cried hard
Till my tears ran out
Sat flat, unmoved
And the pain got out.
Did you?
I did.
this poem makes me imagine myself doing just that. this is a beautiful poem, really. +10
Fantastic flow and rythm throughout all except the first stansa, which just didn't do it for me. I love the concept though and the feeling you have put into it. Kind Regards Gyp's
Did you ever try to shout To the top of your lungs Did you ever run Cause your dreams break? I just cried, cried hard Till my tears ran out Sat flat, unmoved And the pain got out. Did you? I did. with what a conviction and certainty you say i did, i did, i did. such a woman poetess i see rarely. thank you for this greatness in character. God bless you
An outburst of accumulated pains and strife, very poignant but truthful expression
Clever write....doing things that is extra human to let go of the pain is remarkable...we have to do it!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A very nice way of expressing one's feeling thru a poem. Beautiful. Short but overflowing in thought.