Supriya Prathapan

Rookie - 263 Points (New Delhi)

Love (Romantic) - Poem by Supriya Prathapan

It is a feeling which cannot be explained,
When your mind stops working and your heart is over-strained.
You are in a state of absolute delight,
And the face of your beloved always blurs your sight.
When poetry comes naturally,
And sleep eludes regularly,
When walking turns into prancing,
And you feel like singing and dancing.
When your beloved’s comfort and happiness becomes your obsession,
And your reason is repeatedly kicked by your passion.
Then ‘Love’ is the name of your condition,
For which there is only one prescribed medication:
'An equal love from your lover’s side',
This will calm your nerves and peace will reside.
Unrequited love is like severe body ache,
After all, the spurned lover’s heart is at stake.
His / Her eyes are water fountains,
He / She knows that true love can move mountains,
So he / she never stops trying,
Keeps heaving, hoping and crying.
But when love is reciprocated,
Every sentiment uttered for the beloved, seems exaggerated.
The thought of separation is unimaginable,
And feelings and sentiments become totally unmanageable.
The finest of all human sentiments,
‘Love’ knows no divisions, boundaries or impediments.
It spares no mortal soul,
In our lives, ‘Love’ plays an important role.

Comments about Love (Romantic) by Supriya Prathapan

  • Gold Star - 46,883 Points Edward Kofi Louis (6/30/2015 6:06:00 AM)

    Feelings and sentiments with the muse of love. Nice work. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Subrat Pradhan Love-immortal (7/21/2012 12:42:00 AM)

    lost in definition. clear thought, clear words. well written try reading my love poems. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Simran Sanganeria (4/18/2010 8:47:00 AM)

    lovely piece... your literature is very calm, r u into biology? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 116 Points Prince Obed de la Cruz (9/12/2009 9:54:00 AM)

    yes, according to my dictionary love is an action verb and it cannot be shown without proofs! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Preeti Chauhan (8/17/2009 2:40:00 PM)

    wow...wish i had written it...great job friend (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ted M (8/17/2009 12:36:00 PM)

    When in Love little whispers, little things make a difference, as though one is under a spell.......The feelings associated are explained to the finest detail and in a nice smooth flow throughout.......... Nice write..........10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (8/15/2009 3:58:00 AM)

    Hey this again is very good..
    every one goes through this phase I think..
    nice indeed... very lovely to read.. and I like the manner in which express your self..

    shan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 274 Points Kesav Easwaran (8/14/2009 9:24:00 PM)

    The sweetness of love lies in its 'give and take' character...sweet poem Supriya...well meant...well rhymed...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Siddharth Singh (8/14/2009 12:15:00 PM)

    Its a damn good love song.
    Wonderfully written. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarwar Chowdhury (8/14/2009 9:44:00 AM)

    yea without love we cant live! Love is wonderful recourse!

    Nice wording!
    10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 90 Points Varanasi Ramabrahmam (8/14/2009 9:23:00 AM)

    There is no one who is not drenched in rain and has not fallen in love. Falling in love and rising in love together is a blissful experience. It is presented pleasantly. Love happens naturally as rains pour, moon light cools, sunshine warms, flowers bloom, rivers flow, beloved's touch soothes, waterfalls dancing fall and like many natural phenomenon. Thanks for a lovely poem on love. Best wishes (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 14, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, May 30, 2011

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