Lover's Fog Poem by Sandra Feldman
Lover's Fog
The fog won't lift,
Heavy clouds of pain
Have caused,
The flowing tears
To turn into,
Gray, icy rain,
And there, you are!
Just the same!
An immutable shadow
Causing me to wilt
And strain,
The last drop
Of this pernicious
Love, without which
I will never,
Feel or ever be,
The same...
Reminds me of Cheryl’s poem A POET NEEDS THE PAIN. You have just written a heartfelt poem, dear Ma’am Sandra....10++++
The best and saddest poem I have read in a long while, every word fits perfectly in place... to my favorite list.10+
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5/6/2024 9:57:51 AM # 1.0.0.1119
These are results when emotions are built up, we have inner desires, but if the situation does not permit it be successful, it is better to leave a void behind. how painful it might be. A perfectly created poem that describes the present emotive attitude well. I enjoyed it very much, dear Sandra. An excellent poem.