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Lust...

Lust destroyed my love
Lust pushed away my one
Lust made me weak
Lust took the one love
Lust killed my happiness
Lust is a sin I committed
Lust, I shouldn't had done
Lust got my suffocating
Lust made light turn into darkness
Lust made me miss my wife
Lust, my innocent girl is hurt
Lust I hurt myself too
Lust I miss my family I built
Lust, you were my biggest mistake....

Submitted: Saturday, August 22, 2009

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  • Mandy Lamotte (12/2/2011 7:37:00 AM)

    Lust sucks. Because of lust i have lost someone dear to me... I feel your pain.

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  • Naysha Thomas (1/27/2010 5:58:00 PM)

    I LOVE HOW YOU SHARED EVERYTHING LUST MADE ME DO ALOT OF THING TO AND IT MADE CRY ND WANT TO DO IT AGIAN IT MADE ME A BAD PERSON TO TRUST ND LOVE: '(

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  • Katellyne Baker (12/30/2009 2:22:00 PM)

    That's really good, pretty deep. I know the feeling, ive comitted that sin once.

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  • Catrina Heart (8/22/2009 8:00:00 AM)

    fine list of lust, enumeration of cause and effect.........Thanks.....Welcome to PH

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