Mature Thinking Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Mature Thinking

Rating: 5.0


I try to reach out to the top
For she won't bend down, yield
I know it is her property
What if I go for, make a try?

The ladder, I am on, is mine
Yet it shows resent
Maybe it knows better
The fruit isn't prime ripe

I opt-out to come down,
To leave the tree
No grievance there at all
What I need the time being is
Get examined my eyes!

9th February 2020

Sunday, February 9, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: aspiration,failure,fruit,hope
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
All our aspirations may not always bear fruit. As old timers say, there is a time for everything to turn ripe
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 09 February 2020

Lovely last lines...maturity comes to us with ageing with experiences...so it is wise to wait till the fruit is ripe...indeed a beautiful poem 10+

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Kesav Easwaran 10 February 2020

Yes. Let us wait for the ripe opportunity. A good judgement on conditions around would always help out. Thanks for your good feedback Indira. Liked

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 February 2020

For she won't bend down........good one she - - - , NO RESPECTFUL woman will take care will ye

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Kesav Easwaran 12 February 2020

The tree and the fruit are metaphors. I liked your jovial comment, Poet Poet. Thanks a lot

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 February 2020

The ability to view all equally is praiseworthy. I admire your thinking. Good write 10+ thanks A MIGHTY you are a hundred percent loved poet so you INSPIRE me and I tread thee KVE

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 February 2020

There is time for everything! ! ! ! Moving along with the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Valsa George 11 February 2020

Yes there is a time for everything! Wait patiently without losing hope and continue to persevere is all we can do. Let God reward our efforts....! A poem that sings of resilience....!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 February 2020

Each has its own time, in God's own time. A great philosophical write brilliantly depicted. Loved how this marvelous write has been crafted.

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Kesav Easwaran 10 February 2020

Really so Rose Marie. It is He who does everything. We are mere tools. Wonderful observation on my poem. Thanks a lot

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