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Sandhya S N
(11/6/2009 4:42:00 AM) |
beautiful
regards
sandhya
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JOE POEWHIT
(11/2/2009 9:17:00 AM) |
Humility can be mind awaking
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Sandra Fowler
(11/2/2009 6:20:00 AM) |
All is not lost if we are true to ourselves.
Excellent.
Kind wishes,
Sandra
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Ravi Sathasivam
(11/1/2009 11:42:00 PM) |
May be........
Simple but beautifully expressed.
Enjoyed.
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Swatimalya Chattopadhyay
(10/30/2009 12:30:00 PM) |
We are destined. Accepting the destiny is the greatest strength.You are a specialist in short poems.
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar
(10/29/2009 6:41:00 AM) |
ho wonderful. suggestion 'may be' = 'maybe' maybe is one word in this context. shan
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Alison Cassidy
(10/28/2009 10:16:00 PM) |
Your use of the word 'shamble' in this poem is both unusual and refreshingly poetic. Your theme is timeless. Your expression free from clutter and true as steel. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
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Almedia Knight
(10/28/2009 7:59:00 PM) |
Every living things is destine to life and death and the between the two, I believe, one can control his/her destiny or life purpose. Another poem of wisdom and a 10.
I read the other two you suggested.
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