Amit Ray

Rookie - 133 Points (United Kingdom)

****~melancholy Memory~**** - Poem by Amit Ray

Kissed off loneliness
in your togetherness
-a sepulchral statue,
bullet hole

Broken clouds debacle
ghastly cold, in confined
years of solitude,
sycamore

Scuttling in mirrors,
a filled, unfulfilled
fidgeting in sanity
of a snare

Butterflies dead
in avenue of the
cypresses, uncouth bird`s
aureoles


Comments about ****~melancholy Memory~**** by Amit Ray

  • Subhas Chandra Chakra Subhas Chandra Chakra (4/12/2016 5:32:00 AM)

    Broken clouds debacle
    ghastly cold, in confined
    years of solitude,
    sycamore....
    and
    Butterflies dead
    in avenue of the
    cypresses, uncouth bird`s
    aureoles..
    The beautiful lines off your pen.
    Thank you poet for this nice poem.
    It deserves 10. (Report) Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis Edward Kofi Louis (1/3/2016 2:20:00 PM)

    Solitude! ! With the muse of sweet love. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai Ramesh Rai (6/21/2015 4:29:00 PM)

    Cool and calm. Thank you so much for sharing. Awaiting for next. (Report) Reply

  • Wahab Abdul Wahab Abdul (1/3/2014 10:55:00 AM)

    this piece is in different than your customary style... this is better... i love it (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 3, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, January 8, 2014


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