Mercy Poem by Death's Shadow

Mercy



Lay still and close your eyes,
I know it hurts,
I know you're scared.

Sleep tonight
and I'll end your pain.
I promise
I'll take you away.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 13 December 2015

Nicely done, except that the first word should be LIE instead of LAY. Sorry, I can't help it. I used to be an English teacher!

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Mandi June 28 May 2013

Simply terrifying and captivating! Great write!

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Kelly Seale 28 May 2013

oh, this was an unexpected peek into your sleepless nightmare world. I'm impressed with the feelings you conveyed in such a short space of time. Great Ink! ; -) Kelly.

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