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Sonya Florentino (8/30/2009 10:19:00 AM)
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i think you edited this right? The ending seems better now but I miss the 'blinkered eyes' phrase in the beginning....
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Patti Masterman (8/16/2009 8:22:00 PM)
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Interesting meter in tthis poem that sounds so full of hope.
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Marilyn Lott (8/12/2009 7:35:00 AM)
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A lovely winter poem, Nomad. Your rich, warm
words draw the reader into your special story.
Excellent - A '10! '
Warm Wishes,
Marilyn
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Jasmin Whyte (8/4/2009 8:40:00 PM)
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'A rich and fallowed field' will grow many beautiful things, in its own time, even if some years a season is not fruitful. Lovely work. Thank you
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Sandra Fowler (8/1/2009 7:22:00 AM)
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Beautiful winter words. You speak the
language of poetry with depth and grace.
Warm regards,
Sandra
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Marie Shine (7/23/2009 9:10:00 AM)
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A very well written poem filled with magical imagery from your poetic pen Ian.
I enjoyed reading this poem very much. Your writing is filled with an intense passion and draws the reader in from the very first word and holds them their to the final word in the last line.
THANK YOU for sharing Ian.
10/10 for a delightful poem.
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~ Jon London ~ (7/21/2009 7:20:00 AM)
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Nomad my friend...when it comes to imagery painted scenery...you never fail to deliver some of the finest work I've had the pleasure of reading here at PH...you are a very gifted writer my friend.....glad to have you back posting again......keep the coming 10++
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Sonya Florentino (7/20/2009 7:50:00 PM)
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Nomad, i'm glad to see you post a new poem! you know i always check your page every now and then because I know I will love whatever you post and I was right! i just love the way your poems sound...it has inner music!
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