Mid-Winter Sunrise Poem by Nomad Omnia
Mid-Winter Sunrise
You were my mid-winter sunrise.
You shone through the dark caverns of
My blinkered eyes. Your gentle light
Renewed the cycle of my life.
Stirred as the seed in winter soil
My heart unfurled an eager leaf
And stretched a root into my soul
To find a rich and fallowed field.
So rise, bright star of dawning light
Rise ever further to the east,
Ever higher, ever brighter.
Rest further west
Each contented evening.
If you should fade,
I too shall die.
i think you edited this right? The ending seems better now but I miss the 'blinkered eyes' phrase in the beginning....
Interesting meter in tthis poem that sounds so full of hope.
A lovely winter poem, Nomad. Your rich, warm words draw the reader into your special story. Excellent - A '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn
Beautiful winter words. You speak the language of poetry with depth and grace. Warm regards, Sandra
Nomad my friend...when it comes to imagery painted scenery...you never fail to deliver some of the finest work I've had the pleasure of reading here at PH...you are a very gifted writer my friend.....glad to have you back posting again......keep the coming 10++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Nomad, i'm glad to see you post a new poem! you know i always check your page every now and then because I know I will love whatever you post and I was right! i just love the way your poems sound...it has inner music!