Daniel Warner

Rookie - 27 Points (8-4-95- -Y2K / Fresno, CA)

Mirror, Mirror Poem by Daniel Warner


Mirror, mirror on the wall...
Who will be ready to catch her when she falls...
Mirror mirror you see im not big nor tall...
But tell me please, tell me I can be her all...
Mirror, mirror I resemble pitiness you say...
But I've learned to accept and thank anyway...
Mirror, mirror cant you see...
I don't think I can be what she wants me to be...
Mirror, mirror with your reflection so dim...
Why must I fault, why must I sin?
Mirror, mirror with you being so precise...
Can you spare me some knowledge, lend me some wise?
Mirror, mirror I love your recognition...
But please let this noose end me with submission...

Submitted: Thursday, March 6, 2014
Edited: Friday, August 15, 2014

Topic of this poem: Depression


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  • Rookie - 23 Points Marco Angelo (4/13/2014 12:20:00 PM)

    Hahaha..what the nice poem man. i enjoyed reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 211 Points Ellias Anderson Jr. (4/12/2014 10:36:00 AM)

    Mirror mirror on the wall, what the nice usage. OK, in my ideas if we love a person deeply, we have to talk about the things that we know may suffer each of us in the relation. most of us will get sad because of the words those haven't been said and have been kept in our hearts. i myself always try to be frank and tell what is going on in my heart to the people i love, sometimes it doesn't work but most of the time it works, as it doesn't make both of us feeling sad.
    nice work my friend, nice work. hope to see you and your love in the best conditions in the life.
    Ellias. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 309 Points Shania K. Younce (3/23/2014 10:46:00 PM)

    This poem is a true work of flowing motioned art. The imagery is wonderful. Bien! (Report) Reply

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