(error) Poem by Daniel Warner

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Rating: 4.8


To withhold the thought of being perfect
is, in fact, an act of error
for people have been said to neglect
have been immune to this mental terror.

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Shania K. Younce 09 February 2014

I really like. I think practice makes better, stay the same, or worse. I'm not perfect and don't expect any-one else to be. There are a lot of plausible things in life. To many things. Except in the way of God. He made us perfect, but we humans are always flawed! Bien!

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this poem is fantastic for being so short. good job!

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Zeinab Alwady 16 July 2012

short but deep. i love it

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Emily Oldham 14 July 2012

Very clever and witty!

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Samantha Rak 13 June 2012

Short, sweet, I love it :)

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