Mischance ~ Part 1 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Mischance ~ Part 1

Rating: 5.0


The fall of beams on the leaves
And the water and the waves
But when it falls on my hands
I feel the shame of eternity
On a silent night,
when most are dreaming and resting
I see the naked moon sensually walking
Though in its bluntness only love is revealed.

Saturday, November 13, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophical,moon,cute love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 13 November 2021

Justly beautiful.....thank u, dear friend.

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Kostas Lagos 13 November 2021

Brilliant poem! Fantastic work!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 13 November 2021

Beautiful beyond my mind and words Bravo!

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David Wood 13 November 2021

A beautiful insight of love on a moonlit night.

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Poetic Sky 13 November 2021

Yes by chance the truth of love is reveled to our poet friend. I admire your creative thinking.

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Indira Renganathan 16 November 2021

A lovely poem...highlight is the last two lines....full score

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 November 2021

Loveliest philosophical poem on moon and love revealed 5 Stars full, Dr. Asim Sir. My admirations

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 November 2021

A poem of great depth. The mystery and wonders of the moon on our being is magnificently captured in this beautifully crafted poem.adorned with crystalline images.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 14 November 2021

So romantic! Stunning moon beams! Absolutely beautiful ......10

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Mamta S 14 November 2021

Just beautiful poem.

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