Justin Gildow

Rookie - 72 Points (3-26-81 / Washington, PA)

Missiles Of Love (Reprise) - Poem by Justin Gildow

Missiles of love fly through the sky
Missiles of love fly over the world
All around the world they go
Awaiting their destination
Waiting to strike
Waiting to cause many people revelations

On the beach
I look up at the sky
I can see them fly
Seeking whoever it is they want to hit

I hope they don't hit me
Today
I'm not ready in this time being
Not today


Comments about Missiles Of Love (Reprise) by Justin Gildow

  • Rookie - 0 Points Buried Alive (6/30/2011 11:19:00 AM)

    the missles of love will hit you when you least expect it,
    whether you're ready or not.
    ...........so.It might as well be today.

    Will there be yet another sequel to
    this poetic discussion of love (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 5 Points Mohammad Akmal Nazir (6/29/2011 8:16:00 PM)

    Good poem. Vivid imagery and remarkable style. I loved the way you composed the poem. Voted 10.
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Kindly read and vote my poem 'A humble complaint.' on page 2.
    Regards
    Akmal (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 29, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, June 30, 2011


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