(26-01-1994 / Kalyan)

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Mist on the Mirror...

When I saw in her eyes,
That day I recollected,
Recollected the time,
I had spent viewing me,
In the mirror,
A mirror that never lies,
The same mirror,
Which cannot understand the truth,
A mirror,
Which cannot see a thing,
But can reflect every precise detail,
I dared myself to look,
Deep down her eyes,
But couldn't…
Meanwhile she flickered,
And I felt,
As if that mirror,
Shattered into pieces,
But now again,
I could see the mirror,
But this time,
With the mist of tears…

Submitted: Wednesday, January 16, 2013

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  • Sarojini Pattayat (1/25/2013 4:52:00 AM)

    Nice poem.Read more to write well.
    Best wishes.

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  • Payal Parande (1/23/2013 8:53:00 AM)

    beautiful job indeed....well done

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  • Hazel Evelyn Durham (1/18/2013 2:54:00 PM)

    A very deep and poignant poem! Loved it! !

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  • Kishor Pathak (1/18/2013 9:47:00 AM)

    Lovely cook up dude. It surely gives us a good feel. Mirror never lies and when it comes to collection of memories; there can't be anything like mirror. It makes us recollect all our past, think about future, while making us boast upon present. Keep up the good work

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  • Minali Saikia (1/18/2013 9:32:00 AM)

    a touching and a deep one.....
    i liked it very much...

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  • Hari Smith Holms (1/18/2013 7:46:00 AM)

    Mirror mirrors mind and emotion as well. A nice reflection of thought. Loved.

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  • Antonio Liao (1/18/2013 1:21:00 AM)

    like Luwar in, the pepping eye started to see the beauty of oneself, mirror the begin of our existence nemesis in the presence...Great poem in our time...

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  • ~~ Lyda ~~ (1/16/2013 8:57:00 PM)

    A mirror can never reflect the soul.... :)

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  • Thomas A Robinson (1/16/2013 6:11:00 PM)

    Mirrors reflect light, light that can be bent, distorted, colored, etc.
    what we see in mirrors is not what is on the inside of the reflection.
    Mirrors are the greatest place to hide in public. What people see are what they want to see.

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  • Unwritten Soul (1/16/2013 12:45:00 PM)

    A feel...thats how i can say something when i read this, this poem got a self feel that i enjoyed it while reading the whole words_Soul

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