From that day,
We parted away,
Tell me...
You never missed me,
Tell me...
You never felt a tear roll up the lips,
Tell me...
You didn't knew my love for you,
Tell me...
You never liked me,
From that day,
I never could have dream,
Because I never could sleep,
From that day,
Till now,
You owe me,
My lost sleep...
Emotion is waving and it fill the atmosphere to be in dark, very nice written poem Jog, well expressed_Soul
Very nice.. U could have given a perfect ending.. I mean to say that it looks a bit incomplete.. *no offence* :) overall, the poem is a great write. Keep writing.
Very remarkable poem. I can't stand to appreciate you cos you are very good at composing poem. And very talented one.
Intensity of emotions is captivating. A good poem with youthful passion.
Sympathetic is necessary for humanity. you have written a wonderful work here well done
frolic of deep nemeses of truth... so loving memoirs of a true and lasting Love...i love it..God bless
Hello Shivani, Thank you... Would you please let me know what is left incomplete...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
very lovely...........full of emotions and love.............great work.......... :)