Moments Of Awareness Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Moments Of Awareness

Rating: 5.0


Contorted thoughts
are dissipating

restrained
by the
conscious thoughts

guarded
by a pretentious
lucid sanity

calculating
an equilibrium
of reality

oppressing
a divagation
of perception

being present
defines the being.

Thursday, June 2, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: meditation,mind,thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 02 June 2016

There is a power about fully being in any moment. Excellent poem

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Rajesh Thankappan 03 June 2016

When conscious thoughts stands sentinel there is nothing much to worry. Excellent work.

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Valsa George 17 January 2019

To be able to maintain the equillibrium in any trying situation is the trait of a mature person. If you can do so, it is great Mihaela! Great write! A 10

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Valsa George 17 January 2019

To maintain an equillibrium is the salient

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 December 2018

This is a beautiful poem on meditation, thought and mind having thrilling expression and nice diction. Thanks for sharing.

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Unwritten Soul 07 June 2016

Yes, this is a well penned poem...i love the thought, it just provoking me :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 June 2016

Defines the being! Nice work.

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