There is a stillness in the night that, softly
Unfreezes the most frozen of hearts;
There is a glow about moonlight
Which can touch your face
And set it a-glow: like candlelight it lights
And highlights even the most humble place.
There is the sun in everyone
But the moon, like a loom
Works on the finest of stuff
In a silent shuttered room.
There is some good philosophy in your poems.Yeah last stanza is impressive my 10
A truely creative piece of work, the ambience of your moon has definetely touched this heart thankyou Rani 10 x
your poems are good and reflective..... Unfreezes the most frozen of hearts; metaphorically well said....
Your writing is incredible...so descriptive, a joy to read.
A wonderful poem... The moon does seem to do its finest work when one is alone to meditate. -BM
This has got such a beautiful feel to it like finely woven thread Love duncan X
A poem of scrumptious loveliness, beautifully composed. Thanks for sharing best wishes Jon
This is a lovley piece of writing Rani, it is almost surreal in its quality, a perfect description of moonlight, thanks, Lynda xxx
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great atmosphere in this one. Your last stanza is simply superb. Warmest regards, Sandra