More Than My Daughter Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

More Than My Daughter

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More than my daughter; and wind to move the sail.
Beneeth that starry night upon the sea, breath the key.
Strong being life, you held out more than love for ransom.
Complicated by so many, one faith, hope a destination.

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. . 26 August 2009

You really are a spider spinning silver webs ornamented with glass dew. One more intricate than the next and each a perfect work of art. :)

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Patti Masterman 26 August 2009

There seems to be some breathless expectation of anticipated to come joy within this one, that I like very much.

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James McLain

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