Morning.......... [haiku; So It Is Short! ; Getting/Not Getting 'up'; Humor? ] Poem by Bri Edwards

Morning.......... [haiku; So It Is Short! ; Getting/Not Getting 'up'; Humor? ]

Rating: 5.0


Alarm has gone off
I turn over in the bed
What a sleepy head!

Monday, October 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: morning
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
after reading 'Haiku-The Snake - Poem by loke kok yee', i was inspired to leave this as part of my poem comment. he/she appears to be a find new addition to PH's crew.
:) bri
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mj Lemon 14 October 2015

Well done! Do I sense Shakespeare? More Shakespeare? A sublime riff on To Be or Not to Be....?

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Valsa George 13 October 2015

Is this a haiku......? It is a wonderful Senryu.......! Oh I forgot, A rose by any other name would smell as sweet!

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Eugene Levich 13 October 2015

Hai-ku! ... is that a sneeze? If so, gesundheit! Mr. Lok Kok Yee (sounds Cantonese) looks promising.

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Loke Kok Yee 13 October 2015

I am a newbie and I think also a he Nearly sixty eight, I'm an old retiree Your flattering comments fills me with glee But I have still lots to learn in writing poetry. Thank you sir.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2015

There is natural alarm in morning's tune and that is why this gives alert in mind to have more and more fun. Very nice and amazing haiku shared here....10

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