Ray Lucero


Mosquitoes Complained - Poem by Ray Lucero

One day a swarm of mosquitoes complained to God

“Lord God we must protest! ”

“What is it My Children? ”

“We want You to still the Wind”

“Why? ”

“Because the Wind scatters our swarm”

“Ah I See”…God summoned the Wind

Within moments Wind arrived

God Spoke, “Wind, the mosquitoes have brought suit”

Wind replied “Where are my accusers? ”

'Gone…lost within thee Wind'

So it is when Seekers dispute God’s Creation

ROTMS

(Inspired by the brilliance of Rumi)


Comments about Mosquitoes Complained by Ray Lucero

  • Rookie - 181 Points Brian Jani (6/27/2014 4:39:00 PM)

    Wow this poem is different in an amazing way.you just defied the boundaries of poetry, well done Ray (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Atsiylah Garfinkel (1/18/2008 5:38:00 PM)

    Fantastic and witty! 10/10! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 9, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 4, 2008


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