Ray Lucero

***friendship*** - Poem by Ray Lucero

When you sail troubled waters
I’m your oaken ship

Where you stand
I’m firmness neath your feet

When you stroll a summer’s day
I’m your umbrella, rain or shine

When you’re unhappy
I’m your circus clown

When you’re afraid
I’m a warm embrace

When you’re joyous
I’m your playmate

When you take ill
I’m a soothing balm

When Heaven calls you home
I shall be a loving archive of your life


(To best friends everywhere)

Comments about ***friendship*** by Ray Lucero

  • Rookie Millie: willalwayshavehope! ! (7/1/2008 9:04:00 PM)

    oh my goodness.
    this would be a great poem to say if your best friend was getting married..
    i love it..
    its amazing..
    in fact..i have a question. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Tsira Goge (2/7/2008 7:50:00 AM)

    Hello Ray... Thet was beautiful... Tsira (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lime and Tequila with a Splash of Pineapple (2/5/2008 8:52:00 AM)

    Better than some hymns I've heard. Well-done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Konjit Berhane (2/4/2008 11:56:00 AM)

    this is a great poem...but how many friends are like that...

    i loved the expressions though very strong and thoughtful

    thanx for sharing..


    koni (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lucianne Fasolo (2/1/2008 12:20:00 PM)

    This was so beautiful, Ray! So very sweet and true. It's going to my favorite poems list! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 22 Points Scarlett Treat (1/30/2008 10:44:00 AM)

    How marvelous to have your strong, sturdy ship under my feet...or your umbrella to cover me...rain or shine. I like this one best of all I have read so far. Scarlett (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 26, 2008

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