Jennifer Rondeau

Rookie - 98 Points (03/16/90 / Seoul)

Murder Me - Poem by Jennifer Rondeau

Kill me,
Jump Me,
End my life like I care,
Take this gun and shoot me,
Don’t look,
Don’t Stop,
Just murder me,
Just end my life tonight,
As I no longer care,
Or dare to speak of his name,
Or cry out his name in vein,
Murder me,
Murder me here,
Just end it now,
End my suffering,
Make it go away,
Just help me from feeling this rage inside of me bursting to get out,
Please kill me here,
Take this knife and murder me.


Comments about Murder Me by Jennifer Rondeau

  • Rajnish Manga Rajnish Manga (3/15/2015 1:28:00 AM)

    A desperate but truthful voice of one who cannot silence the skeptics and therefore, craving for death. This is an emotional entreat. Great poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Abekah Emmanuel Abekah Emmanuel (10/26/2014 3:17:00 PM)

    I do like this poem too because of its unique style. However, I am not getting clearly the message you wish to communicate. Indeed, we all go through such times as you are going through this poem, but there is no action without a reason. To tell someone to end your life is very critical and one cannot take such a bold decision without any reason in mind. Therefore, I would prefer you, at least, gave us a clue of why you are taking this rather odd decision. Good poem though! (Report) Reply

  • Sarah Mohyla (12/28/2012 7:43:00 AM)

    Its so simple but the story behind it seems so complicated. I luv it! ! (Report) Reply

  • Sarah Mohyla (12/12/2012 12:23:00 PM)

    I love it! It's so relatable for me (Report) Reply

  • Sharmaine Walker (5/13/2012 2:04:00 AM)

    gurl anit no man worth losing your life, but good poem (Report) Reply

  • Rosa Banks (11/29/2009 10:40:00 PM)

    if u die like that u would go to hell and i think that murder is wrong but still good poem! (Report) Reply

  • Hadyn Rodriguez (3/7/2009 3:39:00 PM)

    i really do like your poem, (Report) Reply

  • Ian Singer (12/9/2008 8:41:00 AM)

    best freaking poem i have read all day (Report) Reply

  • Kory Cook (4/3/2008 7:57:00 PM)

    That was awesome. good job (Report) Reply

  • Yeri Lee (1/31/2007 6:29:00 PM)

    hey gurl, i noe how u feel b/c i was just like dat wen i got mad 2 another preson 4 no f* reason! (Report) Reply

  • Elizabeth Willett (11/23/2006 10:46:00 AM)

    i no how u feel but murder isent the answer. (Report) Reply

  • Nina Solomon (9/16/2006 3:21:00 PM)

    i have felt like this before. i like your poems. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 8, 2006

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 24, 2010


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