(03/16/90 / Seoul)

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Murder Me

Kill me,
Jump Me,
End my life like I care,
Take this gun and shoot me,
Don’t look,
Don’t Stop,
Just murder me,
Just end my life tonight,
As I no longer care,
Or dare to speak of his name,
Or cry out his name in vein,
Murder me,
Murder me here,
Just end it now,
End my suffering,
Make it go away,
Just help me from feeling this rage inside of me bursting to get out,
Please kill me here,
Take this knife and murder me.

Submitted: Tuesday, August 08, 2006
Edited: Tuesday, August 24, 2010


Comments about this poem (Murder Me by Jennifer Rondeau )

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  • Sarah Mohyla (12/28/2012 7:43:00 AM)

    Its so simple but the story behind it seems so complicated. I luv it! !

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  • Sarah Mohyla (12/12/2012 12:23:00 PM)

    I love it! It's so relatable for me

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  • Sharmaine Walker (5/13/2012 2:04:00 AM)

    gurl anit no man worth losing your life, but good poem

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  • Rosa Banks (11/29/2009 10:40:00 PM)

    if u die like that u would go to hell and i think that murder is wrong but still good poem!

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  • Hadyn Rodriguez (3/7/2009 3:39:00 PM)

    i really do like your poem,

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  • Ian Singer (12/9/2008 8:41:00 AM)

    best freaking poem i have read all day

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  • Kory Cook (4/3/2008 7:57:00 PM)

    That was awesome. good job

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  • Yeri Lee (1/31/2007 6:29:00 PM)

    hey gurl, i noe how u feel b/c i was just like dat wen i got mad 2 another preson 4 no f* reason!

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  • Elizabeth Willett (11/23/2006 10:46:00 AM)

    i no how u feel but murder isent the answer.

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  • Nina Solomon (9/16/2006 3:21:00 PM)

    i have felt like this before. i like your poems.

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