saadat tahir

Veteran Poet - 1,174 Points (21011965 / Islamabad-Pakistan)

My Babu … … 1606-2k13 - Poem by saadat tahir

Flecks of snow in those bushy brows
Glasses scarce perched on his nose

All day prays and thinks of his kids
with love and care as we do our bids

Bag on shoulder, I enter in a tired haze
Beaming smile, eyes sparkle with sun’s rays

Forgotten all fatigue and my day’s worries
My Baba can fix the lot! And my flurries


Poet's Notes about The Poem

(as a tribute to me on father’s day)

original
Shems (My daughter)
made me proud....with GOD's grace16th Jun,2k13

Islamabad.

PS.
http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/daughters-the-softness-and-laughter-of-a-home/

Comments about My Babu … … 1606-2k13 by saadat tahir

  • Rookie - 337 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (7/2/2013 1:59:00 AM)

    Good image, rhyme and rhythm. I give 10/10. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Passionate Reader (6/27/2013 3:47:00 PM)

    It's lovely and a great tribute! ! ! Enjoyed each and every line. Even i never miss any opportunity to tell my Dad that he is my REAL HERO and my BEST BUDDY :) So whenever i read such poetry i'm moved and i really enjoy every bit of it :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,174 Points Ramesh Rai (6/26/2013 11:46:00 PM)

    the person is lucky who is father of a daughter (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,181 Points Valsa George (6/22/2013 5:13:00 AM)

    The fluid love of a daughter for her father! I am sure you must have been thrilled by this spontaneous and genuine expression of love! How much warmth is packed in this concise poem! Thanks for the critical appraisal of my poem! Yes, Shahzia has done me honour through her Urdu translation! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 745 Points Shahzia Batool (6/17/2013 8:17:00 AM)

    A message to Shems:

    Your poem is heart-felt and well-written, and no doubt fathers are extremely protective of their daughters, rather a father is a superman who is expected to fix all problems. i would like to quote a favorite statement by
    Garrison Keillor

    The father of a daughter is nothing but a high-class hostage. A father turns a stony face to his sons, berates them, shakes his antlers, paws the ground, snorts, runs them off into the underbrush, but when his daughter puts her arm over his shoulder and says, 'Daddy, I need to ask you something, ' he is a pat of butter in a hot frying pan.

    it is not only a tribute but a pen-portrait in just 4 couplets, great! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 543 Points Yasmeen Khan (6/17/2013 2:14:00 AM)

    Sweet and true expression of feelings without any embellishment to a loving and kind father, Bravo! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 71 Points Indira Babbellapati (6/17/2013 1:50:00 AM)

    May the family stay blessed :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Irum . (6/17/2013 12:42:00 AM)

    beautiful feelings of a daughter indeed! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 17, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, June 17, 2013


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