My Crown Poem by Aftab Alam

My Crown

Rating: 4.8


I came here to fetch love
My master has thrown
I will hand over to Him
By keeping it into my crown
Through the living bodies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 27 June 2013

This may be an effective prayer! well done..

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Farah Ilyas 28 June 2013

I came here to fetch love...hope u r do so in well form...nice poem

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Ramesh Rai 29 June 2013

is there any more precious than love. xlent

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David Wood 01 July 2013

Love lives in the heart and flows from the heart. Lovely Poem.

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Heather Wilkins 01 July 2013

love is something we all long for. excellent write

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 07 August 2013

Good. The trend to distribute the God's present is well appreciated.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 16 July 2013

A lovely nice short n sweet poem! Pls coment my fastin poem.

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Yasmin Khan 12 July 2013

Wearing a crown bejeweled with love is the purpose of being, a good write

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 08 July 2013

Your rule is welcome. Nice poem.

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Patricia Grantham 06 July 2013

You came to fetch love and got it. Hold on to it and never let it go. Nice.

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