My Darkness Inside Poem by Blakeney-rose Berry

My Darkness Inside

Rating: 4.5


In my darkest hour
In my blackest night
You torture my mind
So full of spite

I surrender to you
My darkness inside
I loose all control
There is nowhere to hide

The darkness that cuts
Right to the bone
My Darkness inside
Please leave me alone

My Darkness Inside
Wednesday, October 21, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: anger,darkness,violence
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A poem about anger and dark thoughts.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 03 November 2015

Good depiction of life at it lowest ebb, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing BlakeneyRose. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Anil Kumar Panda 22 October 2015

Try to come out from darkness. Nice ink.

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