Dawn Michelle

Rookie (8/3/91 / Van Nuys, California)

My Dreams Are The Sun - Poem by Dawn Michelle

See that golden hue
Burning in the west
My dreams are with that color
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Comments about My Dreams Are The Sun by Dawn Michelle

  • Rebecca Bell (10/19/2010 3:03:00 PM)

    This is beautifully written. I love the metaphor used in it. Amazing poem! (Report) Reply

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  • Dwi Utami Dwi Utami (7/1/2010 6:28:00 PM)

    AMAZING. JUST I.Want say congrat.the the creation poem about sun.is that good, sun is my friend, and friend others, sun is candle in the world, , (Report) Reply

  • Cess Kubai (10/2/2009 7:13:00 AM)

    Au contraire, I doubt that this poet intended this to be positive
    I think the poet feels that they have no control of their dreams and that things seem to go well for everyone else but them. (Report) Reply

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