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Tara Sloblock (7/18/2007 1:09:00 AM)
I find this one of the best pieces you have written. And that's saying something. I'm quite gobsmacked actually, by the, sort of blatant grains of truth and insight here. t x |
Denis Joe (7/16/2007 10:42:00 AM)
I love this Ted the use of double-entendre is great and shiows an inteligent use for this (Britished favoured) form of humour.
I havn't had much time to get through your work but I will say that you are well adept at form. This has a very American feel to it whilst the content (though US English) is very British. A sort of cross between Bukowski and Betjamin. |
Marci Made (7/15/2007 12:58:00 PM)
Excellent...I've found that going it alone, for the most part, works best for me...If I make my own decisions, they can't come back and haunt anyone but myself.
I imagine it was a strict household and 5 stepsons as well as my own son, I never did encounter, 'the normal rite of passage of a young man'....but then, there were just some things I didn't search for.... I love the subjects, the diversity of your writing............marci.xo. |
Firoze Shakir Bollywoods Most Wanted Poet Of India (7/15/2007 11:10:00 AM)
absolutely a lesson of life with a message..pertainng to youth today...excellent ted. |
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