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Viktoria Lilith


My Heart is Gone


You left me
for no reason that i could see
other than your irresponsibility

I'm can't stand you
I've tried to hide these wounds
but the blood welled and fell like my tears

I am no princess
I don't need a knight slay to dragons
but I needed you

I needed you and you left
and the worst part is that you're alive
and I'm crushed and weary

You left me
you left me your daughter
alone with strangers

you don't know what I've been through
You left a seven year old
to hold her tears in for fear of being unloved

this is why tonight I will stand and fight these demons
Demons that you sicced on me
and I will return with my heart totally gone

Submitted: Thursday, December 31, 2009
Edited: Thursday, December 31, 2009

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  • Austin Wheeler (1/8/2010 10:27:00 PM)

    So yeah my dad isnt around either so I understand. Its amazing how easily love can morph into hate. You will be OK. Hey I think I added you on facebook but Im not totally sure because their was a wicked awesome foreign language reigning supreme all over the place but I still delved into the topic of bisexuality with this mysteriously sexy Eastern European or Arabic girl because I am impulsiveand can not control myself nor would I want to. Add me if its you. My real name is Austin Wheeler and Im in Plant City, FL in case copycats show up. Delete this message cause it might selfdestruct. IDK I havent tested out the selfdestruct yet. (Report) Reply

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