Premila Patel

****my Imagination Of A Purple Sky**** - Poem by Premila Patel

I imagined a Purple Sky today from dawn till dusk.
A gold moon and millions of gold stars lit across this silk sheet of a Purple Sky.
And then it rained streaks of fine gold.
The majestic sky then decided to be very generous and poured down tremendous amounts of Rubies, Diamonds and Sapphires.
All different colours, shapes and sizes.
A great big King then appeared radiant in the Purple Sky and looked down at me with such a delight...
I was atonished with joy!
He was wearing a dazzling gold crown encrusted with millions of white diamonds and a crushed Purple velvet gown with such a long train.
It was certainly a sight for my sore eyes.
Here.. he said come take me hand... I want you to be the Queen of this Purple Sky, but most importantly be the Queen of my Purple Heart....
He swept me off my feet and we sat in the great heights of his Kingdom in the Purple Sky drinking goblets of wine.

A colleague then tapped my shoulder and notified me I was late for a meeting! ! ! ! !
I then discovered something strange as I put my hand into my jacket pocket out appeared a beautiful Purple Ruby ring.....

Comments about ****my Imagination Of A Purple Sky**** by Premila Patel

  • Rookie Ted M (8/7/2009 9:19:00 PM)

    This is an amazing fairy tale. Something in the league of Cinderella and the glass slipper. Nicely constructed dream....... May your dream come true. Best wishes 10+++ (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (5/30/2009 1:53:00 PM)

    Amazing imagination, nicely penned.10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 184 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (5/6/2009 11:09:00 PM)

    the flow of vocab/ thoughts tally with each other/ boost up the theme/decor/ lovely and meaningful (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 20, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, April 20, 2009

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