Premila Patel

The Marriage Under The Autumn Garden - Poem by Premila Patel

Welcome to the auspicious marriage ceremony under the fresh autumn garden...

The scent of autumn as it lingers and disperses into the soft chill of the air.
Almost feels like somebody has perfumed the musky air.
The feeling of love all around you as it strongly evolves and whirlwinds into this prosperous atmosphere.
The Ivory sky sending down a special message of such a pretty life.
What a day of joy and real beauty as two lovers have come to express their undying love under the magnificent yellow autumn garden…
The big auburn crispy & yellow leaves fly and crackle on the floor as eager footsteps enter this marriage under the tall arched ebony trees.
The brunette conkers scattered on the floor as if someone has polished them especially for today.
Many hidden but still vivid under the distinctive shiny leaves.
As the couple have completed their vows, the groom kisses the bride.
The yellow garden is then sprayed heavily with pastel colours of pink, blue, green and white confetti.
A captivated contrast! What a picture!
The bride does something unusual she throws her gold leafed crown across the garden then all of a sudden a curious baby deer runs by.... And her crown lands on its tall hooves……
Great laughter and cheers then fill the air.
What an unexpected surprise!

The perfect marriage under the Autumn Garden! ....

Comments about The Marriage Under The Autumn Garden by Premila Patel

  • Veteran Poet - 1,805 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (6/6/2009 2:22:00 PM)

    heir undying love under the magnificent yellow autumn garden…Autumn garden still blesses the marriage, wonderful scintillation nature yet talking under the vale of tune, descriptive,10+++
    thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 27 Points Fiona Davidson (4/10/2009 6:29:00 PM)

    Beautiful and unique Premila...makes a wonderful read...Fi 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yvonne Selase (4/8/2009 1:41:00 PM)

    very lovely poem. you, re a good story teller. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 7 Points Dr Hitesh Sheth (4/4/2009 11:13:00 PM)

    You painted a beautiful picture with strokes of words.....i would call this a prose poetry....10+++......... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 21, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 10, 2009

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