My Love Poem by Noelle Mott

My Love

Rating: 5.0


I know we just broke up yesterday,
But I feel like a piece of my heart way taken away,
There was no other guy that would talk to me all night
And sing me a little song, my little lullaby
Your smile is bright like the stars that twinkle up above
Your shadow covered over mine when are lips touch forever
Place take me back my love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tyler Herring 11 March 2013

This is my favorite poem deffinatly a 10! :)

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Roseann Shawiak 07 March 2013

I can feel your heart breaking in this poem while you want still want to retrieve your love again. Good expression of emotions.

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Gajanan Mishra 07 March 2013

Take me back my love. But love is always here. Omnipresent. good poem. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Noelle Mott

Noelle Mott

Tucson, Arizona
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