She packs the dark bags
under her eyes
that have become
her trademark®
crying copyrights©
on every word
she has ever spoken
She leaves you
with nothing more
than corrections
of all the beautiful poetry
you composed
so lovingly
and for no one else but her___

© 2007 ted sheridan

Ted Sheridan

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